[Board] Draft 4 - Club opening
Jeremy Small
jsmall.105 at gmail.com
Sun Jun 21 17:44:06 MDT 2020
Great work.
Jeremy
603-661-7371
On Jun 21, 2020, 12:00 PM -0400, PETER DAWSON <poko at comcast.net>, wrote:
> Pat,
> You've done an excellent job of both welcoming members back to their club, and outlining just how safe we've made the entire property for them. My only comment, and I may be knit-picking, would be to remove four words from the entire document. These are:
>
> Pier Project
> Funds Available
>
> I'm thinking that any mention of the new pier coupled with fiscal issues may touch off additional mail. Disregard if you think this point doesn't warrant another edit. Just a thought, and enjoy your day. Also, the date of your letter is 2020, not 2021. The day you proposed for opening the club sounds fine.
> Thanks for spending so much time in covering each of the details geared toward the memberships' enjoyment of the summer season.
> Best,
> Peter
>
>
>
> > On 06/21/2020 10:26 AM Pat Dowey <pdowey at gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> >
> > Happy Father's Day to you & yours!
> >
> > Thank you for the feedback. I used all of your suggestions and re-stated a few things.
> > Please review the second paragraph. I am not sure this letter needs to 'lecture' on masks but I did get the most feedback on the importance of wearing them in a group setting and stressing this to the membership, especially since guests are being allowed.
> >
> > It seems Tuesday may be the consensus day for opening under these guidelines, but Chris can get it out tonight if I hear back from you. I'll check email about 7PM tonight.
> >
> > Anyway, I'm signing off for the rest of the day to enjoy the holiday with my family.
> >
> > Best,
> > Pat
> >
> > p.s. Paulette, I will add the burgee info before I send it.
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